Essay two resources

I had reviewed more than five sources about communicating with the dead.
Two of my sources were a book written by the same author. The books are Reaching to Heaven and Talking to Heaven. The author James Van Praagh gives insight on our ability to communicate with the dead. The book helps confirm any questions of doubt that one may have about communicating with the dead. Both books compliment one another. There were many scientific findings and proof provided. Both books were a great asset to my paper.
Another source was a book titled The Truth about Medium. This book was excellent. The author Gary Schwartz wrote his book based on a true life medium. This book offers solid evidence of psychic ability, mediumship, and communication with the dead is real.
I also found a great article from Time Magazine that was very useful to my paper. It answers the question relating to what happens when we die. The article relates to my subject by providing claims of individuals who has experience dieing and coming back to life.

Blog assignment #6

I will begin my research by searching the web, the web will assist me with places where I can find books, magazine and newspaper articles. The library is a great place to find books and old newspaper clipping. Know matter what subject an individual need, it can be found at the library. The library has current and dated information. Utilizing the library will give me knowledge so my paper can be informational and argumentative Another great source will be utilizing individuals who have experience and/or knowledge about my topic; Can one communicate with the dead?

Essay Revision

I appreciated all my classmates comment. After reading and re-reading my esssay, I felt my essay needed much work. I began revising my essay by providing a good introduction that would catch my readers attention. I changed my concluson so that my readers would want to read more. I made sure there were no grammical errors. I decided to add more information and examples. Last but not least, I re-did my work cited page. Hopefully, my work cited page is correct.

Peer evaluation essay #1

I receive very good feedback from my fellow classmates in reference to my essay. I think all the comments that were posted was very helpful. One of the most important comments I receive on my essay was that it was not catchy. I did not grab the attention of my readers. I will go through my essay and make it more interesting for my readers.
Most of my classmates said I need to work on my introduction and conclusion. I will utilized this information and try to revise both as best as possible. Someone also said that my reference page needs to be in mla format. Again I will utilize all the feedback I received, so my essay will be properly done.