I receive very good feedback from my fellow classmates in reference to my essay. I think all the comments that were posted was very helpful. One of the most important comments I receive on my essay was that it was not catchy. I did not grab the attention of my readers. I will go through my essay and make it more interesting for my readers.
Most of my classmates said I need to work on my introduction and conclusion. I will utilized this information and try to revise both as best as possible. Someone also said that my reference page needs to be in mla format. Again I will utilize all the feedback I received, so my essay will be properly done.
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